Late post... but I guess that's appropriate given the subject matter.
Hallowe'en is coming up this Friday and I felt obligated to write something in theme for this month's creative content. So I whipped up a little flash fic. It's shameless, I know.
As usual, the story will also be posted at the short story link to the right.
For those less inclined to creepiness... you can find my children's Hallowe'en story, Witch's Brew, here. Or in the new Children's Story section to the right.
Enjoy, and have a great Hallowe'en!
I wanted desperately to turn on the light. I wanted to bathe in light. But again I looked up to my bedroom window. I had picked a first floor apartment because I figured it would be safest during a fire. I was now wishing I was a few floors up. I left the light out - maybe they'd think no one was home.
Who is this person anyway? Who am I so afraid of? For all I know it's the little old lady from down the hall. Maybe she needs some help and she remembers the nice young girl who works at the coffee shop.
Hallowe'en is coming up this Friday and I felt obligated to write something in theme for this month's creative content. So I whipped up a little flash fic. It's shameless, I know.
As usual, the story will also be posted at the short story link to the right.
For those less inclined to creepiness... you can find my children's Hallowe'en story, Witch's Brew, here. Or in the new Children's Story section to the right.
Enjoy, and have a great Hallowe'en!
Knock Knock
I
heard the knocking before I was completely awake. It inserted itself
neatly into the dream I was having as the ticking of a grandfather
clock. I stood on tiptoe, staring into its antique, yellowing face.
Panic jolted my body into wakefulness as I noticed the face staring
back at me – two eyes shadowed and hidden behind two small holes
just above the centre, where the hands met. The dream slowly faded
away, but the ticking stubbornly remained.
Tick
Tock
Tick
Tock
Tick
Knock
Knock
Knock
Someone
was at my apartment door.
I
glanced at my clock, thankfully small and digital at my bedside. 1:45
am. Who would be knocking at this hour? My mind raced over the list
of possible people and the panic that had started to ebb upon waking,
began to rise once more. No one came immediately to mind.
The
knocking had stopped and I listened to see if the person would
continue. If it was an emergency, surely they wouldn't stop. Surely
it would sound more frantic than the metronomic pounding I thought I
had heard.
Silence.
I
remembered my phone. I reached over the bedside table to find it. My
hand, trembling slightly, lost its grip and it clattered loudly on
the hardwood floor. The sound reverberated through the entire room.
I
held my breath. What if the person were still outside the door? What
if it was better if they thought I was still asleep or not home? I
mean, I really didn't know who it could be.
The
silence was taught, like an instrument string about to snap. Finally
I exhaled and turned on my phone's screen. The electric light seemed
to illuminate the entire room. I felt exposed. I glanced up to make
sure my blinds were closed completely before realizing how silly I
was being. After all, it was probably no one. Someone a little tipsy
getting the wrong apartment.
It's
only Wednesday, I thought. There must be people who drink on
Wednesdays right? Or maybe they're just overtired from a late
shift at work. They've realized their mistake and gone home now.
I
glanced at my phone. No messages. My family lives over an hour away,
so they would definitely call first. I don't have many friends in
town and certainly not any that would drop by in the middle of the
night unannounced. My boyfriend, Sam, he might.
But
Sam's in Korea. He won't be finished his semester for another month.
Did something happen?
I
texted Sam's number and asked if he happened to be in town.
I
browsed the net for a while to calm my nerves before finally laying
my head back on the pillow. I nearly jumped out of my skin when the
knocking began again.
Knock
knock.
Knock
knock.
I
listened closely, praying that maybe it was someone knocking on the
neighbour's door. Maybe it wasn't even my door at all.
Knock
knock knock knock.
It
was definitely mine. Maybe it was a neighbour. They'd been locked
out. They needed help.
Then
why only your door? There are plenty of others to choose from. And
why so calm?
I
started to get out of bed, figuring I would just going up to the door
and look out the eye hole. But then my imagination won out.
What
if they're waiting? They'll hear your foot steps. They'll see your
shadow pass the peep hole.
I
remembered that stupid scene from Scream when the man leans in to
overhear a conversation in the bathroom stall next to his. The knife
that was waiting. I imagined a knife on the other side of the small
glass hole. Waiting for my eye to curiously glance out.
That's
stupid. You're being stupid.
But
by the time i got to my feet the knocking stopped. I sat back down on
the bed.
I wanted desperately to turn on the light. I wanted to bathe in light. But again I looked up to my bedroom window. I had picked a first floor apartment because I figured it would be safest during a fire. I was now wishing I was a few floors up. I left the light out - maybe they'd think no one was home.
Who is this person anyway? Who am I so afraid of? For all I know it's the little old lady from down the hall. Maybe she needs some help and she remembers the nice young girl who works at the coffee shop.
I
tried to tell myself how ridiculous I was being. I tried to think
about how the morning staff would laugh at the shop tomorrow. I was
still getting to know everyone, this might be a nice story to break
the ice.
It
could be someone from the shop.
But
no one from the shop knew my address.
Someone
knows it. It's on your emergency information. Someone could have went
digging...
I
tried to clear my mind. I took a breath and glanced at the clock.
2:35 am.
Knock.
Knock
knock.
Knock.
Goddammit.
Please, no. Just stop.
I
thought about calling the cops. But what would I tell them? Would
they come out when I hadn't even tried to see who it was? Maybe I
should call my parents.
They're
an hour away, what are they going to do? Find your body in the
morning?
I
willed my mind to shut up. I wanted to puke. I tried to objectively
decide how absolutely out of proportion I was making this situation.
I failed miserably.
Knock
knock knock.
Knock
knock.
I
gritted my teeth. I stood up. I had to consciously force every muscle
in my body to move. I tried to be as quiet as possible, but I
couldn't see well. I walked into the dining room table on my way to
the door. Every time there was a pause between knocks I froze. Held
my breath.
But
it always started again.
Knock
knock knock.
Knock.
Knock
knock.
I
licked my dry lips as I made it to the door. A small explosion of
yellow, fluorescent light marked the eye hole. I lifted my head up,
and looked out...
??? AAAAHHH! Just the perfect ending! Grrr! Stephen King would be proud !
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